My First Video - "Fantasy"

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Hello everybody!

Lately, I've been experimenting with drawing, composing and poetry. My first presentable piece of art is the video below.

Please give me some feedback. While I'd surely love to get some praise, constructive criticism is what helps us grow - and I want to grow - so be sure to tell me whatever is on your mind.



Thank you,
Rhythmic

WARNING: While this video contains no explicit sexual scenes, it does contain some "implicit" ones. There are people who have reported to have found this video disturbing. If you tend to get offended by erotic content or easily disturbed, please check out some of my other creations instead.




Lyrics:


Have you dreamt of a place
That you can return to
When you want to be safe,
When you want to be free?
Close your eyes,
Breathing deep.
Ride your dreams.
Ask your heart,
And maybe there you're gonna be.


Remember the sea. Walking down on a beach,
Look around, do you like what you see?
Smell the smells - ocean scent.
Hear the shouts of the birds,
And the echoing splashing of waves.
Feel the breeze in your hair,
Feel the sand on your feet,
As you bask in the sun's warm embrace.


Distant memory of sweet home,
Mighty arms hold you strong,
Keep you safe - wake it up, live it now!
Show the world who you are,
Shout it out, bare your heart,
Give your gift, share your wealth,
Feel your power!


P.S. If you happen to have some friends you believe could say something insightful, be sure to ask for their opinion.

Click here to download this video.